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Post by tomoe[Z?] on Jul 9, 2006 20:37:41 GMT -5
ok. this is my story originally from another website. here it is.
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Post by tomoe[Z?] on Jul 9, 2006 20:37:56 GMT -5
Mirrors of water fell from the sky as he walked toward the grave. One year has passed from the death of his beloved. Darkness had become his friend soon after, to live forever, bringing new mourners to the darkness. This place was his home. "I'm sorry" he said quietly. "Who are you talking to?" asked a voice behind him which made him jump. "Don't scare me like that James!" "Well, who were you talking to?" "She used to be my girlfriend until she died. I never got to apologize to her for all the mistakes I made. I couldn't take it anymore and I needed to keep my mind off her and then I met you, and now I'm a vampire." "Sure, whatever. I need to go find a human. I'm hungry" "OK. I'll meet up with you later James" said Kuro as he found a tree to sit in and wandered into deep thought. A few hours went by before he heard footsteps come near. He watched as another mortal came to a grave, but why in the rain? " It fits you well, the weather that is. Ironic isn't. The sky cries for you.....I'm sorry. I'm sorry...I regret...not meeting you but..." The girl's voice went a wispier. Kuro could no longer hear the girl. Kuro looked up to the tear stained sky then looked down to the grave where the girl was now crying. The girl was the same as he was the same day a year ago, but he wanted to give her a friend to depend on. "Hey are you okay?" "Yea, I've just been having a hard time"said the girl. " I think i can help you" said Kuro as he bit her neck turning her into a vampire also. "you are one if the darkness now" said Kuro as he beard his fangs. "your a vampire? I love vampires" "and now you are one too." "well, what's your name?" asked kuro. "Adyu" said the girl. " Well, how would you like to get out of the rain and help me find my friend?" "Sure, but what's your name anyway?"asked Adyu. " Kuro" " Your name means dark, it fits you." said Adyu as she followed Kuro. "thanks" said Kuro as they walked to go find James. They walked for a while until they heard a siren. There, a mess if cars, scattered. People running everywhere, total chaos. " James, what did you do this time?" said a very fustrated Kuro. "nothing really." spoke James as he came from behind Adyu, which made her jump. "Every time you go to find food you end up making a mess!Stop it!" Yelled Kuro. "and your point is what? By the way, who's the girl?" "Her name is Adyu, shes one of us now." "NO fair!, you already ate!" "James, your an idiot" said Kuro as they all walked away from the chaotic scene. " so....what are we going to do now?"asked James. "What we've done for the last year. Look for food and new members." replied Kuro as they walked through the woods. Then Adyu said "Hey, tomorrow's Halloween. do you want to go to this mansion that's supposed to be haunted? Even though we're vampires doesn't mean that we can't have a little fun." " Hey, if we're in the sun....and we're not burning up. What's with that?"(it stopped raining)asked Kuro. "wow, that's random and I don't know" said James. "Hey, We're you listening!!?!!" "Not really." said James and Kuro at the same time. " Fine. I shall ask again. Do you want to go to this mansion that's supposed to be haunted since tomorrow's Halloween? It seemed like fun and it's abandoned so no one will see us." "Sure" *next day* Kuro, Adyu,and James walked up to the door of the 3 story mansion. "Hey, do you think there's a basement?"asked James. "Dude, you're really weird. I mean we're looking at this place about and you're asking if there's a basement, i mean I would be asking like how big the place is but then again, we're right in front of it."stated Adyu. Then Kuro yelled, "ALRIGHT,I'M THE ONLY NORMAL ONE!" "no you're not Mr. why aren't we burning up?" said James. Adyu opened the wooden door and took a few steps in. James and Kuro followed, All amazed by the size and state of the building. The house had wood flooring and red colored walls.... In the middle of the room there were wooden stairs that led to the second floor and split to the right and left. There was a huge chandelier with a few crystals missing, which were no where to be seen. On the walls to the left there were mirrors. The one slightly off from the center had a hand print on it that seemed to have been dragged down. Adyu walked over to the mirror. "How do you think that happened?" she asked as she placed her hand on it. "I dunno..." replied Kuro. James wandered off into the other room because he got bored, as do us all. "OMG AHHHHHH!"Yelled James as he ran out of the room and curled up in the corner. "what happened? " asked Adyu. "Bi-ig.....spi-iider" "Oh..." By now Kuro was rolling on the floor laughing. "IT IS NOT FUNNY YOU IDIOT!!"yelled James. "yes it is" "no it's not" "yes it is" "no it's not" "yes i-" James found a worm and threw it at Kuro, who was now running for his life from the all powerful worm. Adyu and James were laughing now and Kuro ran up the stairs into unexplored territory. After a while of waiting, Adyu and James went to search for Kuro. They climbed up the stairs and took the hallway to the left. There had to be around 10 or 11 rooms in that hallway. After searching about 6 of them they came to a door, a dark green color with a black handle. "Why is this door so different from the others?" asked Adyu. "I don't know.....I don't have a good feeling about the things behind it....I think we should go search the other rooms before this one" "Why so serious now?" "Like I said I don't have a good feeling about the room....it has something about it." Then James walked into another room and Adyu followed. After searching the other rooms on that hallway they moved into the next. Then they came to the first room. "BOOOOO!" "WAHHHHH" Kuro had hidden behind the door and scared James and Adyu. "THAT WAS SO NOT FUNNY!!!!!!!!!" yelled Adyu. "yea it was" answered Kuro. "Hey guys look at this" said James. James was holding up a picture in black and white with a little girl in it standing in front of a tree on it holding a doll. "it's kind of creepy isn't it?"asked James then looked out the window. "the sun's rising" "thanks captain obvious" Adyu added. "The whole night was wasted" Complained Kuro. "that still is a creepy picture"said Adyu. "Hey Kuro did you see that creepy door?" asked James. " Yea.....wait no" "your a genius aren't you?" sarcastically added Adyu "well, lets go." "where?"asked James "to the door...." replied Adyu The group of them walked to the door and opened it. They stepped into the room leaving the door open and lights off. in the room there was a glass chandelier hanging in the middle of the room. there was a very old ballroom feel to the room. classy but like you wouldn't want to trust it. that someone is watching you feeling where you feel that someone or something will pop up at you. Reddish purple walls with a golden brown floor. a carpet covered the middle of the room.very elegant. A few couches were around the border of the room . a window between each one with a view to the back of the house. the gloominess of the day made it even creepier. "WHOA. DUDE THIS ROOM IS HUGE!!" exclaimed Kuro "DUDE THIS IS AWESOME!" yelled James as he ran around in circles. "why do you guys have to be so loud?"asked Adyu. "BECAUSE WE WANT TO!!!" answered Kuro as he joined James in the circle of stupidity thing. Adyu looked around the room for a bit and found a door that led to a hallway. "why is it soo cold?"asked James who stopped running around. "yea, why?"added Kuro. "if you paid any attention to what I said earlier you would know. this building was abandoned." "I'm hungry"bluntly said James. "so am i but do you see any humans around here?any animals? no..." responded Kuro. "but i'm hungry..." complained James. "are you coming or not?!" Yelled Adyu in the hallway. "sure....." The hallway was slightly narrow and small. It still had the same kind of feeling and seemed to go on forever...and ever.....and ever. To each side, once in a while there would be doors. the doors were painted black. "more rooms?" asked Kuro "let's check" said James as he opened one. "What the heck? a wall? why is there a wall behind this door?" "trick doors." said Adyu with no emotion. "why?"asked Kuro. "to confuse people. make them want to leave. scare them." replied Adyu. "should we be scared?"asked James. "dude, we're vampires. nothing should scare us. i mean we can die, but anything that comes at us will get their own before they get us." stated Kuro, a bit nervous about it all. "but what about ghosts?" asked James. "can you say paranoia." said Adyu, slightly mocking James.
They continued down the hallway until they found a door painted white. Adyu opened it and stepped inside. the room was very odd. The whole room was full of mirrors. the walls, the floor, the ceiling, and the door was covered. the only light in the room was from the small window in the corner of the room. Kuro walked to the window and said: "hey guys, the sun's come out." "Anyone know what time it is?"Asked James. " I know it's November 1st and that's about it. replied Adyu "is this a dead end?"asked Kuro. " i guess"said Adyu as she searched the room for another door which was kind of hard since everything is covered in mirrors. "I don't get it. there mirrors seem to not have been put in in pieces but as one single piece which is impossible." as she said this the door slammed shut. "WHAT THE HECK IS WITH THIS PLACE?!" Yelled Kuro at the top of his lungs Kuro ran toward the door and tried to open it but it was locked from the outside. "LET US OUT! PLEASE LET US OUT! STOP PLAYING WITH US. I WANT OUT. I WILL NOT BE PART OF THIS GAME. ARE YOU THAT GIRL FROM IN THE PICTURE? DO YOU WANT TO PLAY? I'LL PLAY IF YOU LET US OUT. PLEASE?"yelled Kuro, now totally losing it. " Kuro, calm down, we'll be alright. remember, you're the one that said nothing should scare us. don't be afraid." said James, trying to calm down Kuro. "I don't like this" "Hey guys.....we're really high up"said Adyu looking out the small window. "What do you mean? we're on the second floor and there's 3 floors so it can't be that high."Complained James, still by Kuro. "Well, it's not anymore" "What?"said James and Kuro at the same time and rushed to the window. "What's going on in this place?"asked James. "why does it seem like we're on the sixth or seventh floor of a building? It's impossible. We didn't go up any stairs and i didn't feel that the ground was slanted so this is impossible."added Kuro who was a little calmer. "All I know is that jumping is no longer an option and i really don't think we can turn into a bat so we're stuck here until we think of something else"stated Adyu, trying to think of a plan. "So if this place is crazy and putting us in places we're logically not supposed to be in then how do we know how many days we've been in here. Does this place morph time cause then it would explain why there's no clocks."asked Kuro. "I got no clue" "same" "I'm tired" "It might be a good idea to try to get some sleep" suggested Adyu. 'but we might not wake up' James thought to himself. Soon enough, after the sun went down they fell asleep. Adyu awoke in the middle of the night. 'what dripped on my face' she thought to herself as she looked at the still sleeping James and Kuro. She put her hand to her face as then looked at her hand. 'red....like blood?' And then she looked up to the mirror ceiling. ' a poem? ' as soon as she thought this she felt a wooden spike go right through her, entering her heart. 'is this a game?' was her last thought as she drifted into the dark abyss that we call death. Some time later, when the sun was strong enough to wake them, they awoke from their surprisingly quiet sleep. "Hey James, where's Adyu?" asked Kuro only to see him staring at the ceiling. "Hey....what are.....OH MY GOD!!!!!!" He looked up only to see Adyu hung up by her wrists and ankles with a spike through her heart. Next to her was the poem. written in blood. "no.....no.....this isn't happening. this is just a dream. I'm gonna wake up. I'm gonna wake up....this isn't happening. not to her....just not to her. THIS ISN'T HAPPENING!"Yelled Kuro who broke down crying. "Kuro, I know this is hard dealing with our loss but we gotta figure out a way out of here. Whatever's in this house knows we're vampires and how to kill us. Did you read the poem or note or whatever it is?" Kuro looked to the mirror ceiling and the poem said:
This game you will never win. I will Kill you. You will never find me. Try all you will. One by one I pick you off. One. by. One. Just know. You won't make it out alive. never.
"We won't survive this"said Kuro softly. "We have to try." "I got an idea" "What?"asked Kuro. "maybe if we break all the mirrors we'll find a way out." "that might work" "Hey Kuro, what should we do with Adyu's body?" "Let's get it down.....her stare's starting to scare me." "It's weird. it just seems like she's sleeping"said James. "yea.....it does seem like she's sleeping. it's really sad." "I have a question. How did Akki die?" "she was hit by a train. She died on impact. It still seems like she's here with me. I still love her and I probably always will. Forever." replied Kuro. "that probably hurt....a lot" "it probably did. but then we wouldn't die. we would need a steak or something sharp to kill us. Decapitation maybe. I'm not sure if a gun would. Are you?" "I got no clue" said James as he put Adyu's body on the corner. Kuro had already started to kick out the mirrors. Soon after James joined the kicking fest. They kicked out most of the one wall's mirror when James said: "Hey, why don't we just kick open the door?" "Good idea. Why didn't we think of that earlier?" "I do not know" said James as he started kicking the door out. After a few kicks from both of them the door came off it's hinges and fell to the floor. "We need to get out of here as soon as possible. The longer we're in here, the more likely we'll be killed by whatever's in here." wispered Kuro before the sprinted down the hallway. They ran until the end of the hallway where the room with the dark green door. When they entered the room, straight across it on the couch was 3 dolls. Kuro walked towards them. "Dolls?"asked James. "they look creepy. Voo-Do ish." "they do. I wonder why one has a pin through it. like where it's....heart......is....Adyu?" "We need to get out of here." said Kuro as he picked up the other two and went to the door. "Hurry up"yelled James. As they were running, Kuro hit the glass vase and fell. The vase fell right on top of the one doll. "Kuro, are you okay?" "I think but the vase fell on one of the dolls. Now there's pieces of glass stuck in the doll. Which one of us do you think it was?" "we're really not sure if they're voo-do dolls too but do you feel anything cause i feel fine." "I feel okay....but hungry." "We can get food when we get out of here" Kuro picked up the dolls and ran toward the steps of the main entrance following James. "hey James why did you stop running?" Kuro stopped when he saw what James was staring at. "What is going on in this place?" asked Kuro. "James, where are you going?" James ran down the steps to what he was seeing. The chandelier hung on the ceiling was covered in blood and dripping to the floor. James walked to almost underneath it. "James be careful. That thing doesn't seem stable." "I bet it is" James walked underneath it and somehow, got no blood on him. "see." the cable holding the crystal chandelier snapped and down went the giant sized piece of glass. The sharpest piece, the middle went straight trough James's heart. as the rest of the smaller pieces pelted his body. Before James could even scream, he was dead. "James!?!" "James." "James....." Kuro ran down the steps to his best friend's body. silent cries wouldn't be heard. There was no one for him once again. Kuro's clothes we're becoming soaked in James's blood. "James, wake up. please wake up. Please." "Why won't you wake up?" 'because he's dead' he thought to himself. 'but there's the door. I can get out. I CAN GET OUT" Kuro put James's doll next to his dead body, then grabbed his doll and ran toward the door that he entered this demented place through. He opened the door only to find a pitch black room. "no...." 'is there an end?' he asked himself. After a while of sitting there a figure appeared from the dark room. A little girl. The little girl from the picture, and she was carrying a....knife? Kuro looked up at the girl. The girl slid the knife across the floor and Kuro picked it up. "What?" "Either you do it or I do it by force. Thanks for taking my dolls. You killed him for me. There is no way out. I control everything here. Nothing gets out. That's how it became abandoned. It's mine and no one can ever change that. I'll give you some time. Remember, you do it or I'll do it." said the girl as she walked back in the room and disappeared into the dark. 'I killed him. I shouldn't live but Kuro and Adyu would want me to get out' he thought to himself as he wandered around this endless mansion. A year had passed since the death of his friends and the appearance of the little girl. He still carried around the knife in his pocket. Sadly he had to resort to drinking his friend's blood to survive because every time he tried to get out he was proved wrong. The skeletons of his friends only remained and because of his mental condition he had begun to talk to them. He was loosing hope. And he had begun to hear that little girl's voice in his head. 'This is the end. I gave you a chance, but now I have to do it by force.' 'I still want to live' 'I'm ending it.' 'no' 'yes' Kuro's hand slid in his pocket and pulled out the knife. 'how are you doing that?' 'I told you. I'll kill you by force if I have to.' 'please, don't' And with that the little girl's power overtook his body and she took the knife and put it straight through his heart. "I'll see you soon Akki"
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Post by tomoe[Z?] on Jul 9, 2006 20:39:19 GMT -5
what do you think. a little creepy but still normal for me. THE END
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Post by Dia on Jul 9, 2006 21:56:49 GMT -5
dude, its amazing! i love it. ^_^
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Post by tomoe[Z?] on Jul 10, 2006 10:26:34 GMT -5
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
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Post by Dia on Jul 10, 2006 10:31:03 GMT -5
your welcome. ^-^
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Post by tomoe[Z?] on Jul 10, 2006 14:28:32 GMT -5
^^
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Post by Lily of the Night on Jul 11, 2006 11:02:03 GMT -5
Hey, guys, comments go on the other board, I"m thinking. Not to scold you or anything, but ... yaeh, whatever.
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Post by Dia on Jul 11, 2006 17:30:20 GMT -5
sorry.
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Post by tomoe[Z?] on Jul 12, 2006 11:23:10 GMT -5
sorry.....continuing on that one
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