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Post by Lily of the Night on Sept 17, 2006 12:53:58 GMT -5
THis is a plot line that I came up with on vacation (I had soo many plot ideas in Manistee. It was scary. Every day I can up with two or three at least. I can barely remember half of them. Oh, and the xXxHolic theme is on =3).
I still need to work out details, but I'm creating a board for it so that I remember to get around to it sometime soon before I forget. Oh, if you're wondering, Kanoa is the name of the country or continent (I have yet to choose) and Yes, I did just come up with the name as I was creating the Title for this Thread....
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Post by Lily of the Night on Sept 17, 2006 13:10:40 GMT -5
Actually, I came up with it while reading Anne McCaffery's "DragonSong", if you want to get a feel for the setting.
Alright, I'll start working on this, but I still have homework to do. Maybe I'll go to the bathroom first...
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Post by Lily of the Night on Sept 17, 2006 15:14:31 GMT -5
Alright, I'm going to start working the plot as I'm finishing up my homework, so yes, this will be a plotline overview. That means that this will be spoilers. When I start up on the actual story, I post it in the title, but for now, this is all it is.
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Post by Lily of the Night on Mar 21, 2007 14:31:03 GMT -5
name, name, name. "Oh what's in a name?"
"And I got downhearted, every time that I--"
"Pumba!"
Alright, as you can see: BRAINDEAD.
And all I really need is a name!
v
Alright, there shall be a v in the name. Time for another random letter pick;
v
Damn, v again. Okay, maybe two v's? Again!
n
Alright. Netevv?
Nevet? ... I like that, actually. Although it kinda sounds like "Verlette"... But I gues the random letters never lie. Nevet it shall be.
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Post by Lily of the Night on Mar 21, 2007 14:38:36 GMT -5
A time span in which....?
Nevet grew up WAIT!!! There's a word "revet"? What the hell does "revet" mean?
Alright, Revet is a verb meaning "to barricade esp. with masonry in order to protect an embankment". Or something like that. It works for my girl. I like Nevet, but I guess Revet it shall be.
NAME CHANGE:
Revet grew up with stories of a wondrous hero who had taken the people of her time out of a great period of loss and sorrow. The country, Konoa, had allied with a much larger country across the sea in a war against one super-nation named Uril. Yet as the war raged on... WAIT AGAIN!!! THIS IS PERFECT!!!
Okay, name change AGAIN:
Her name is Nevet. Now " everything up there, I'm starting where it left off.
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Post by Lily of the Night on Mar 21, 2007 14:48:10 GMT -5
Yet as the war raged on Kanoa's small resources were exhausted. The people tried to lean out of the war, yet their "ally", Mamask [prounounced "mah-mausk"] pulled only tighter on them, turning them near into prisoners. The people of Kanoa were stuck. Then a wonderful woman named Revet came into their ranks.
This woman, equipped with magic like no other, threw off the oppressive power of Mamask with the aid of the Kanoans.
Every child grows up hearing the tales. Yet they are not all trust worthy. A lot of little tweaking can be done in three centuries and Nevet has always had a hard time believing these stories where such wonderful "magic" has been replaced with modern appliances. Basically when a parent tucks their child in and tells them how she was magically able to shoot fire at the opposing army the kid isn't going to wet his/her pants in excitement. Fire-throwers had been mass produced for several years now.
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