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Post by Turpentine Kisses on Mar 30, 2007 0:27:11 GMT -5
Life is a road. The unexpected twists and turns. Damage can be repaired with A little TLC; Potholes, the memories of irreparable damage. The ups and downs of hills there to keep things interesting. Intersections provide variety. Sometimes by night are we forced to travel the dark road; But following the dark is the relentless day – joyous light. We’re worn away with time; But never forgotten by those we’ve helped move a l o n g . Some shitty thing I did for English at like 2:30 in the morning. xD; Iunno. Critique would be loved... Gotta hand it in and stuff. |
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Post by Lily of the Night on Mar 30, 2007 21:17:33 GMT -5
Cuuute <3
having trouble thinking now, so I'll let you know later xD
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Post by Turpentine Kisses on Mar 30, 2007 21:22:58 GMT -5
xDD
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Post by Lily of the Night on Mar 31, 2007 21:10:53 GMT -5
I loooooove it beyond belief.
How come you can never do something bad? Your stuff is almost always too amazing.
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Post by Turpentine Kisses on Mar 31, 2007 21:32:20 GMT -5
xD; WTF YOU TALKIN' BOUT?
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Post by Lily of the Night on Mar 31, 2007 21:57:07 GMT -5
UHM, THE TRUTH!
I always feel weird cause it's like you want opinions and I feel like I should every once in a while send some constructive criticism your way, but when I think about it, there's nothing there to criticize! Every thing's just too good!
And then it's like "It's so amazing, all I can say is just 'it's too great!'"
Maybe I'm just bad at this xDDD
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Post by Turpentine Kisses on Apr 1, 2007 2:33:26 GMT -5
xDDD
WELLLL. I thank you for... attempting. xD
Iunno. Maybe it's a good thing you can't pick up on anything... AM I REALLY THAT AMAZING?! xD
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Post by Turpentine Kisses on Apr 1, 2007 2:33:50 GMT -5
sorry - silly question. The answer would of course be yes. C:
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Post by Lily of the Night on Apr 1, 2007 18:57:44 GMT -5
THAT AMAZING AND MORE!!
And everytime I say "amazing" now I think of Tim (sadly)
One time he said "Jeez, Katie, why do you even talk to me?"
And I said "Cause you're amazing!!"
and he started choking. When I asked him what was wrong he said
"That's normally what you'd say on the morning after kind of situation."
So, Olivia,
YOU
ARE
AMAZING!
hee hee
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Post by Dia on Apr 1, 2007 18:59:27 GMT -5
^-^ i have to say that i love the poem as well. i took me like five times to read it and understnad. but i got it.
kt....your weird. but i love you that way. lol. just thought i'd let you know....
-hops off- -looks back- sorry to intrude.
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Post by Mermaid on Jun 24, 2007 12:58:22 GMT -5
i liked the poem. was the assignment 'compare driving to life'. or something along those lines?
that's what it seemed like to me, anyways.
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Post by Turpentine Kisses on Jun 24, 2007 14:58:55 GMT -5
Thankies, thankies.
Actually, it was to do a life metaphor poem... I just chose to do a road because I couldn't think of anything better. xD;
And then we had to do a pessimistic life metaphor... and mine turned out uber emo. Which is why it's not up here. xD
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